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Negative:
The show as overly dramatic at times in my opinion. Some of the emotional situations seemed a bit forced. How does the player all of sudden have a problem with the girl wanting to have the abortion? He never expressed any real sort of religious belief, so my assumption is that he would be relieved by the abortion. He even went as far as to scoff at the idea of going to church with you when you were in the gym scene. Why did we see the scene with the the Asian girl who got the fake call/kick out and her kid? She's not a central character and that storyline distracts from the ones we care about. I wasn't sure if I was supposed to see her as a more pivotal character.
Positive:
I was into the story. I wanted to see what happened next. Your characters are likable and interesting. It didn't seem like there was really a weak link on the cast. The lead actor is great. Good looking, solid performer, and commanding. The direction, blocking, location shoots, etc. were good. Often times when people shoot these types of things on a budget, they can feel cheap and thrown together. You were obviously conscious of that and really put it together nicely.
Negative:
The show as overly dramatic at times in my opinion. Some of the emotional situations seemed a bit forced. How does the player all of sudden have a problem with the girl wanting to have the abortion? He never expressed any real sort of religious belief, so my assumption is that he would be relieved by the abortion. He even went as far as to scoff at the idea of going to church with you when you were in the gym scene. Why did we see the scene with the the Asian girl who got the fake call/kick out and her kid? She's not a central character and that storyline distracts from the ones we care about. I wasn't sure if I was supposed to see her as a more pivotal character.
Positive:
I was into the story. I wanted to see what happened next. Your characters are likable and interesting. It didn't seem like there was really a weak link on the cast. The lead actor is great. Good looking, solid performer, and commanding. The direction, blocking, location shoots, etc. were good. Often times when people shoot these types of things on a budget, they can feel cheap and thrown together. You were obviously conscious of that and really put it together nicely.