It's almost offensive that this even went to production. It should definitely have been left on the desk it landed on, or better still, nudged into the trash pile. It's embarrassingly bad. I guess that's why it only made it to digital, but still. What a waste of money and resources that could've gone towards something worthwhile.
There's just no redeeming qualities to it at all, it's simply a bad and very basic attempt at creative writing that should never have been commissioned. Primary school aged children can write better than this and must feel quite insulted to have this thrown at them and be expected to engage.
There's just no redeeming qualities to it at all, it's simply a bad and very basic attempt at creative writing that should never have been commissioned. Primary school aged children can write better than this and must feel quite insulted to have this thrown at them and be expected to engage.