I gave you thumbs up because of the following reasons:
1) Your method of delivery; your structure was flawless.
2) You told your truth in a rather humorous manner: Now I had been enlightened by the "Brown" American life, it kinda reminded me of the movie "The Big Sick"
3) I like the way in some parts of your "comic" the background gave us a sense of "saw and tell". For example, when you talked about your mom being like an "IPhone 8" in India (I am not quite sure if it was because her family had owned a camera or her beauty (she is beautiful) or both) your background magically changed to project her photo. Although the same idea was seen in Kevin Hart's "what now?" (which I also loved), Your's was rather built around a true story like-wise. Nevertheless, the shadow feature was also new to me and I loved it as it had that "dramatic effect" also.
4) Going back to the humor part, It was funny; I shared quite some laughs here in my space, but It was pulled down by some pretty emotional parts of your comic to a point that I felt insecure as to either have empathy or to laugh to a joke, If I chose the wrong decision, I kinda felt bad afterwards.
Overall, It was a good stand up comedy, and emotional. Keep up the good work!
Hasan Minhaj: Homecoming King
(2017 TV Special)
A great example of a stand-up comedy
21 February 2018
Warning: Spoilers