I honestly liked it at the start, okay? I was afraid of cringey anti-comedy and annoyingly bad jokes, but it started off pretty strong. It all went to crap very soon, though. I'm honestly amazed how not a single one of the 5 plot lines set up were developed. I'm amazed how there was basically no evident character growth. I'm amazed how unbelievable the character growth they tried to cram in was. I'm so sick of these young internet directors writing a script and not having anyone with deep criticism look over it! Any English 11 student could look at this script and ask "Why didn't you finish it? Why does it end so abruptly? What's the climax supposed to be? Why did you foreshadow something and then never bring it up again?" Over and over again, Gallagher sets something up and doesn't follow through. I'm just annoyed at this point. It could have been great! Next time get someone to edit your script who's not just going to tell you it's hilarious and shoo you along. Please, for the sake of the world's respect for YouTube.
Review of Internet Famous
