I don't understand how this script got screwed up.
This level of acidic rain would have destroyed cellular equipment, as well as the tires on the cars.
But why is the tap water contaminated? There's no scientific rationale behind these flaws.
Other than that, the plot and general flow of the story is good. The premise is unbelievable because this concentration of acid rain wouldn't just suddenly appear. It would occur gradually.
When I come up with story ideas like this, I would quickly reach the realization that the premise is so flawed, it's not worth the time continuing. I'm dumbstruck that others just plow ahead without a care. Why can't they keep thinking up ideas until there's one that holds water?
This level of acidic rain would have destroyed cellular equipment, as well as the tires on the cars.
But why is the tap water contaminated? There's no scientific rationale behind these flaws.
Other than that, the plot and general flow of the story is good. The premise is unbelievable because this concentration of acid rain wouldn't just suddenly appear. It would occur gradually.
When I come up with story ideas like this, I would quickly reach the realization that the premise is so flawed, it's not worth the time continuing. I'm dumbstruck that others just plow ahead without a care. Why can't they keep thinking up ideas until there's one that holds water?